Revisions - Cover Page

Initially, I began editing the captions and advertisements on the cover page to fill the empty space and make the title page more intriguing to consumers. Below is the before and after of the cover page. I added larger, more colorful fonts to the captions and added more eye-catching text boxes to make them stand out. This allows readers to immediately know what the topics of the articles are in the magazine, hopefully persuading them to purchase our product. We also decided to change the title page to a more bold, professional font. Although we originally wanted a font that matched the theme of artsy, crafty designs, we realized that the rest of the magazine, pictures, and other text can show that theme while the title should be more professional and constant since it will remain the same for all other issues of our product.

Before                                     After